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This fic was inspired by this prompt on the kmeme:
The whole "cutting your head open and seeing freaky hallucinations" - ordeal didn't go as smoothly as in canon but actually left more than one scar therefore causing the LW to feel quite strange and unlike herself. However she still has enough sense to comprehend what has been done and so stumbles back to the Mansion. What are her symptoms are up to the author. Will she be an anxious mess? Has she suddenly developed strange urges that she just can't resist? Is her mood drastically changing all the time?
And more importantly: what is Desmond's reaction?
You can go any route you want to but here's some food for thoughts:
- He kind of just drags her to a bed so she could "sleep her fucking head clear" but she turns it to a wrestling match
- He tells her to forget it and go home (since he thinks she would just mess everything up) but she goes totally "NOOOOOOO!" and he's like "Goddammit" and gives up
- He actually feels some pity *gasp* and tries to be more nice and patient with her which leads to her having a reaction of an intimate kind.
Should I continue this story with smut or should I end it?
EDIT: Thanks guys!!!
The whole "cutting your head open and seeing freaky hallucinations" - ordeal didn't go as smoothly as in canon but actually left more than one scar therefore causing the LW to feel quite strange and unlike herself. However she still has enough sense to comprehend what has been done and so stumbles back to the Mansion. What are her symptoms are up to the author. Will she be an anxious mess? Has she suddenly developed strange urges that she just can't resist? Is her mood drastically changing all the time?
And more importantly: what is Desmond's reaction?
You can go any route you want to but here's some food for thoughts:
- He kind of just drags her to a bed so she could "sleep her fucking head clear" but she turns it to a wrestling match
- He tells her to forget it and go home (since he thinks she would just mess everything up) but she goes totally "NOOOOOOO!" and he's like "Goddammit" and gives up
- He actually feels some pity *gasp* and tries to be more nice and patient with her which leads to her having a reaction of an intimate kind.
Should I continue this story with smut or should I end it?
EDIT: Thanks guys!!!
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hey! was this on fanfic.net years ago? i feel like i've read this before during my desmond phase 
did you ever end up writing a second chapter?
did you ever end up writing a second chapter?